I like this so far, with Brian and Adam... it's cute. A little over-dramatic perhaps, but it's still very good. My parents'd probably kick me out if I ever came out to them, *shrugs*.

I recognised 'tali', *grins*, and I liked, although you didn't really explain it. Mark's reaction to being raped...was possibly a tad unrealistic, however it is a very delicate subject... I'm just suprised that Mark seems so well adjusted (with the excpetion of when he was drinking). I'm still curious about what going on between Mark and Brian, you wouldn't think he'd be so comfortable with Brian, after being raped. On to the next 6 chapters...

good. wonder when the next chapter is going to be. you should try to get it up as soon as posable.

AH! YES! YAY! FINALLY! I ADORE YOU! WE AL DO! I'M HYPER NOW AND ECSTATIC AND THIS IS MY FAVE FIC IN THIS WHOLE WIDE WORLD AND I ADORE IT AND I ADORE YOU AND YAY AND COUNTLESS KISSES AND HUGGLES FOR PUTTING MARK AND BRI TOGETHER! YAY! ALL MY LOVE AND MORE AND GET BACK TO ME SOON!

ALL MY LOVE!

Rea

PS- ah... the possibilities of Mark's past...

Yaoi is an anime/manga phenomena, NOT a general use to be thrown around in original fiction.

Why is Brian going out with Adam? He's an arse. Feh, even if he can't have Mark, he shouldn't like Adam...talk sense into him dammit.

Poor Mark, you just keep on hurting the poor thing, feh, make him happy, *cough* with happiness coming in the form of Brian *cough*

Well, update soon...

Interesting fic...it seems pretty cool! Good first chapter. I like how Brian's too nervous to 'come out of the closet' and then he meets someone who's so outspoken and everything. Heh. Nice job, Toodlez!

I LOVED it! I hope you write more VERY soon! Like NOW! GET YOUR ASS MOVING! *gives author her ultra-puppy0dog-eyes* PWWEEASEE!

Okay, I don't care how much you want Bri and Adam to hook up, I DO NOT CARE, you are going to hook Mark and Brian up or I'm gonna arrange a protest or something. And I'll load you with "MarkBri" e-mails, and I'll sulk on the subject for the rest of my life, and if that doesn't work I'm gonna cry like rain and do you see how much I want them together? C'mon, Aly! Okay, so I ain't gonna threat you really, it's just that.. Ah, dammit, if only you owed me a favor *grins* then I'd know what to say. And now, I'm only beggin ya. PLEASE? PLEASE TELL ME YOU'LL RECONSIDER WHO YOU'LL HOOK UP! PLEASE TELL ME THAT YOU'LL THINK ABOUT IT! C'mon, we want them together.. Pleease.. Pleeaasee..

All my love

PS- I have to tell you how much I adore them. Mark and Bri. They're relationship is so loving and true and.. Omg, I just love it. And peeps tell *me* I picture D and Aze good. I mean, that's ZERO compared to this..

PPS- I do believe a romance would only deepen their amazing relationship. *grins* We all think that. But besides that, think of possibilities.. Mark's fears and troubles, and Bri helpin him, yadda yadda.. Ok, I'm stopping now. I'm starting to annoy myself, I can only imagine what *you* must be thinking now ;p. Kiss!

PS- And don't be mad. I'm simply obsessed.

'Lys, you know I'd be perfectly happy to beta this story for you. *cough* And this chapter *does* have a lot of grammar/spelling errors. You need to learn to use commas, man! *laugh* Otherwise, that was a damn funny chapter. Sounds like something we'd do to a sleeping vict-FRIEND!

Are Mark and Brian going to get together. I mean...they should, they so need each other. God dammit. Update so i can see what you decide. I want to know!

You know, I was sort of enjoying your story up until chapter nine. This may sound accusing to you, but you entirely stole the basis of that last chapter from Bless Me Father by ILGMA. I know that you've read it because I got to that story off of your favourite stories list. So, basically, you might want to be a bit more careful when you say "This is all mine! My story! My characters! My plot!" at the beginning of Differences if it's not going to hold true. Flogs!

AH! YES! YES! YES! Oh, hunny, don't hook him up with Adam, this is oh so much better deal! He belongs with Mark! Ah! Well, I know you won't listen to me, but still. AH! Ok, so I love Adam too, but please notice yourself for how many chapters you didn't even mention him. Meaning: MARK is the one! LOL! Ok, now really. I'm ecstatic. E-mail me, btw. Ok. I'm hyper! I WANNA TALK TO YOU TOMMORROW. If possible, of course! But all this Mark-Bri-Adam talk is giving me ideas *lewd grin* Just.. Ah. Get back to me! LOVE YA!

So what if it's short? Loved it! Hunny. I wouldn't ask this if it wasn't a really big plea. WHY DON'T YOU HOOK UP MARK AND BRI? (that was supposed to sound desperate, btw) They would make the bestest couple.. I adore Adam too, though, but Mark would be soo awesome.. Ahh.

I simply ADORE the talks Mark and Bri are always having! You don't even realise how much fun they are!

Oh. God. Now he reminds me more and more and more and more of this certain muse of mine. I loved it.. In all its horror, it was beautifuly written. Ah.. I'd like to see that one, now.. Mark and Adam.. Ah.. Since they're my faves. But Mark is straight, right? Nothin then. I adore them the way they are. Poor Mark. I love him. You write best angst I've ever seen. I dunno how to describe my feelings right now, I just adore this, I love it.. I love the plot, I love the characters and I'm reading on.