|Reviews for Mistake: Final Phase|
| Dave chapter 26 . 6/19/2015
Great story! Please please please update it.
| XjasminekimX chapter 26 . 3/12/2013
Hehe the whole story line starting from the first series is soooo good! This is one if my favorite fanfictions please continue writing your awesome stories! (P.S. I really hate Jocelyn so I hope there's a tragic ending for her, hehe!)
| Loreil Darksky chapter 26 . 6/19/2010
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY! You're very talented at writing, I really wish you'd continue this. Your writing style is amazing, and I've read every one of your stories that you've posted. Please update son!
| danni-loves-too-reid chapter 4 . 2/3/2010
i love chasity lol n chad n the girl i think cheryll's relationship is uderly adorable!
| xIceyDemonx chapter 26 . 12/31/2008
I really enjoy the story alot of characters you intend for people to hate i really do intend to kill one day other then that you should become a writer. I would love to correct some of the spelling and grammar mistakes if you want, but only if you decide to make these stories into books.
| RunFree chapter 26 . 6/12/2008
All of these mistake stories are really really good...and to think i finished today.
| K.S. Raine chapter 26 . 6/12/2008
Hwahh! It's been so long since I've tuned into this and on a random whim I decided to check it out today. Lo and behold! Some new chappies!
So cute, as always. Can't wait to see you finish this 3
(I've gone through multiple name changes, my last recent one was Rain's Whisper, if that at all sounds familiar p)
| Fresh Harvest chapter 26 . 5/31/2008
When I got the e-mail saying you posted a new chapter, I was shocked, haha. I was trying not to get my hopes up, so I thought, "Oh, it must be an author's note or something." Imagine my surprised delight when it was actually a chapter! :)
I enjoyed reading about your characters in the past, and I was happy to see you're continuing this. LOL, Milo and Kevin are so adorable, and I'm glad they're getting married. :)
And Ulric FINALLY sorted things out, finally. :P
Hope you'll update again. Have a great weekend. :)
| K.S. Raine chapter 25 . 8/20/2005
ehehehe... over a year eh? lol love your story, yeah. it's silent-chan, with a changed name again ; Ohohohoho o ... yeah. ;; I haven't updated it TWO years. BWAHAHAH.. wait.. that's not supposed to be good. but hehe, I just recently updated though, so.. yeah. I looked through mine too and saw that I seemed to have uh... bad grammar at some points. i feel weird writing again. anywho, love LOVE love your story. update soon. (hypocrite speaking here) lol. see you.
| xbluxmoonx chapter 25 . 8/11/2005
Yay! Great chapter! The ending was pretty funny! So, are you going to make another phase or is this the last one since it's only year three and I think college is four years unless you want a Bachelor's or something. Anyhoo, I hope you update soon!
| Grace chapter 25 . 8/10/2005
I don't think I usually like this particular genre of stories-or maybe I do and haven't found many good ones-but I really enjoyed reading Mistake. I discovered it only recently, but I did read the first two and all of this one up to here.
I love your characters; I think they're very endearing, and well-developed. I never felt like you over-described them in hopes of trying to make them seem developed, and yet, I feel like I know them.
From the first time he appeared, I liked Ulric. And I like Eden for his modesty and overall niceness, and Chad because he seems sweet.
I also like Alicia. Bach intrigues me.
I know you said it was cheesy, but, I don't know-maybe I'm just a cheesy person?-I thought that was an excellent way to end the chapter. I felt this pang in my heart because he was the kind of person whom you seldom/never described to be that way.
I'm not sure how exactly to review your story. To make a nonsensically uncertain review short, I think I've become attached to your story.
I know you're busy, as all of us are, but I really do look forward to the next five chapters, whenever you might happen to get them out.
Speaking of which, I liked your plot a lot, too. Some parts could count as cliché, true, but you managed to change the clichés to some really unique twists and turns.
You scared me with the part about the coma for eight years, too. Don't remember which phase that was in, but... heh.
I hope you'll update soon, though I did read what it said in your profile.
Grammatically, there are errors. But I think that's obvious to any piece of writing, right? None of us are absolutely perfect.
I think you've done a superb job. I look forward to seeing how you continue and end Mistake, although in one respect, I don't want it to. Still, I get that it wouldn't be great if it just dragged, either.
Hmm... I'm still uncertain of the origin for the title being Mistake. Is there a specific reason?
God bless you :)
| xbluxmoonx chapter 14 . 8/9/2005
Gah, this is too hilarious!
| Maggy d chapter 25 . 8/2/2005
OMG! I'm so glad that you finally updated! - Man, I can't wait to find out what happens between Alicia and Ulric! I'm sorry, I'm hyper! (That's why I have so many exclamation points in this review, LOL!) Anyway, so glad that you're back and I just can't wait to read more! Thanx for updating!
| Coeur Sans Espoir chapter 25 . 7/25/2005
Hey! I just finished reading all the Mistake phases and I really enjoyed the trillogy so far. Please update Mistake:Final Phase so I can finish this awesome story!
| Sparkles-Chan chapter 25 . 7/22/2005
Yay! I'm so glad you updated! And I liked this chapter. Hopefully we'll see Ulric come to his senses soon and everything can be happy again. )