|Reviews for Desire|
| aurias chapter 1 . 1/21/2003
I like stanzas 5 and 6, but I feel that the last line of stanza 6 mars the flow somewhat.
The last stanza seems to be repeating though in a different order. Is that necessary or are you trying to prove a point? I think more likely to prove a point. Good work.
| Robs chapter 1 . 9/8/2002
Cody! LoL. I like this and I know where the inspiration is coming from!