Reviews for The First Real Transition
unexpected source chapter 1 . 8/18/2002
obscure and random and very visual.

its a like and odd daydream or the imagery when

you try to put a theme or subject in words,

as always, its smelting and very good

Aviendha19 chapter 1 . 8/17/2002
i cant tell you, how much this poem is great, it is awesome, awesomely streaming down the page in evercontinuing lines and it is overhwleming and there are so many differed little affectators in the poem it, stabs you all over
Jade6 chapter 1 . 8/17/2002
*scratches head* I think I get it... very deep... not going to make an ass of myself to try and explain what I got out of it though because (in all likely hoods) I am way off... anyway, like always, I love your language and the images you create with words. Wonderful work.