Reviews for The Second Real Transition--In Arcadia
unexpected source chapter 1 . 8/22/2002
mystic, and oh i cant tell you how much i love it. One of the best poems i have ever read.

kai
Jade6 chapter 1 . 8/21/2002
Somehow I missed reviewing this when you first posted it... *scratches head*... how did that happen?

Anyway, wonderful work... very sad story which is painted so beautifully and vividly in your words. It is a real eye opener this piece.

Jade
Aviendha19 chapter 1 . 8/17/2002
rose of dresden, this is sucha beautiful poem-it is everything as the first one except, more somehow, because the images, "little boy looked about the gold hanging off the trees or the birds made of tangerine colored diamond", and "the cars are a cobweb of summer lead" and ah so many more, the cat claw heat, and the long time ago church, its just so affecting. now who is the one who is jealous?