|Reviews for Desolation|
| Remalna Marguerite chapter 1 . 3/28/2001
This is gorgeous...it made me feel serene.
| Akira Bane chapter 1 . 10/19/2000
Very good , I've never read poems quite like these . . . . .
| Shine chapter 1 . 10/14/2000
Again, as with the other I'm not familiar with Hawaiian folklore so the overall meaning is lost on me, but the language you use is very vivid and well-utilised. Great job, again.