can't wait for more XD

Whats next, whats next.

-.- i must bribe you. if you update this story i'll put you on my favourite authors list O.O please would you wuff me.

I am smitten. Head over heels. This is truly a rare gem to find on this site. The writing, the storytelling, is just breathtaking. The way you open each scene, the way you weave each moment together, the characterization. Absolutely nothing of FP cliches can be found here. This would be a stunning contribution to slash fiction, but even if you don't complete this revision of it, I would still love to read it. You'll be getting an e-mail from me soon. :) Best of luck with university.

That was so good and you are so bad for leaving it like that.I've just finished reading the entire thing and it was story flowed so brilliantly and the description was so good ,i could almost feel the heat of the pampas and the calm of the change from village to city could have been fleshed out more but it was still good.i really hope you update because i am seriously interested in reading the rest of this on its 2007 four years since you updated .i want to read the ending before i

This is an amazing story. It's well written, it's interesting and it's got that lovely angsty undertone that I adore reading in stories. I can't imagine why you never finished it, but it's a great shame. I hope inspiration hits you somtime when you least expect it. Keep writing ~ BG

I like I like I like! Really really good story. You're a wonderful writer!POOFtoodlesTJword up.

*converts from glomping Carlos to strangling him* Stupid male! I hope Fabrizio leaves him and takes the damn house with him!POOFtoodlesTJword up.

*is still glomping Carlos* WAI! SO CUTE! You're a wonderful writer although I'm sure I've said that enough times... _'POOFtoodlesTJword up.

*grins* THAT WAS SO CUTE! ...I'm so eloquent today... _'POOFtoodlesTJword up.

*glomps Carlos* I love how you characterized him in the church. The way it was written was so...*glomps again for lack of better expression* Anyways, he reminds me of Draco Malfoy in a way, only not really. You know?POOFtoodlesTJword write!

OMG! *goes ninja on the dad's arse* He's a bugger! I like it I like it I like it! Brilliantly written so far. Thank you for the lovely email btw! I was actually planning on reading this eventually, I've just been swamped in homework and writing a fanfiction that I've sworn to update once a week _ *dies* Anyways, lovely chapter!POOFtoodlesTJword up.

what else is going to happen?

I will pray that you rise from the dead and update.

hEY YOU LIKE REALLY GOTA continue this please?I love it!