Yay! I like this story. Although I must say that I was surprised when you killed off Carlos. Oh well... And again, your writing is impeccable. I am excited for the next chapter.

Yummy...It's great so far and I can't wait to read the rest! I'm a bit sad that Carlos and Fabrizio had such an abrupt end, but Luigi sounds like an interesting character and I'm betting we will hear quite a bit more about him in the future.

Hello,
I have to tell you that I think you are an amazing writer. Your style is so different from all of the other slash writers I have read. Your stories remain in the memory long afterwards. Please continue. It would be a shame if someone of your calibre put down the pen.

i've been awake all night re-reading this, because it's brilliant, and no review i write will ever do it justice so i'll just beg for a seedy update:)

I love it, Its brilliant ect. ect. Your writing is fantastic and I love your Plots. MORE!

Oh, you are ~such~ a tease! Please update soon, I am ever so anxious to find out what's next!

OO-wah! Damn dishes, but they must be washed... I shall return as soon as I can!

Ah! I'm such a stupid whore! Ok, sorry... I just can't help but feel a little guilty, as my name is Maria as well. Lovely story though, I shall continue reading!

Great story!

Why aren't you writing? HM? Please be planning to finish Fabrizio's Story. I really like your writing.

Morissa

I simply adore your writing. It is sensitive and evokative and so dreadfully moving all at once. As I read your wonderful stories, I felt like I was hardly breathing, that all that mattered was that I kept on devouring word after word.

Needless to say, I hope you update soon. :)

Ok for some reason didn't put up my reviews for chapters seven and eight so here they are again:

Chapter 7:Oh no! This is a horrible chapter! Well not really horrible. You write it well and I suppose it's true to life but...bah, I was hoping you might have a happy story. *tear* I'm really not liking Carlos right now, not one bit. And it's looking like next chapter is going to make me even sadder...on the other hand you're very good at bringing emotion out of your reader.

Chapter 8:You really are a wonderful writer. So much emotion in one chapter. Bah! I was hoping that they might perhaps gain an understanding and at least have some semblance of friendship in the end but I guess it was not meant to be. I am a little confused as to what Carlos died from but perhaps that will come up in later chapters. It's amazing how fast the bright lights of the city could wash our Fabrizio in Carlos' eyes. It made me lose a lot of respect for him. It seemed as though he'd only gone for Fabrizio because he was basically the only one he could get in the country. Very sad. And now Fabrizio is alone in the city...and he's got a lot of learning to do. For example his raw anger when Julia comes makes him so obviously vulnerable and well, showing weakness can get you hurt. Plus the fact that he makes comments about how much courage it must have taken her shows that sometime during his life he gains a new perspective on anything and has learned a lot more about the adult world and the thrills and confusions of a big city and the social elite...I can't wait for the school of assasins

Pride is not a good thing to be ruled by...on the other hand this is probably going to lead to some very good things. Do I see a future roamnce? See, I'm trying to look for a happy ending! It is interesting however that Francesco calls himself a broken assasin...why broken? I have a feeling he's going to have a very interesting history. For example, who is his real father? and why was it said that he has much to learn? Perhaps these two will be able to learn from each other. He doesn't really need Claudio and his gang anymore if he's got a trained assasin now does he? So many questions to be answered. I can't wait for the next chapter!

"From that moment on, I decided that I would never walk away." Yay 'brizio! He spends all his life with no one noticing him and one day people finally do, and he ends up the worse for it. I'm worried for poor 'brizio, he;s nto doing well. He might not go around all forlorn anymore but purposefully inducing fear into everyone? Well I don't think it could lead to anything good. What happens the day his employees don't feel the need to work for him anymore? Or what if someone pays them more to kill ' brizio? He really needs to learn to fend for himself and hoepfully find some joy in living.

EeeEEEEeee! *grins stupidly* Now we get to the good stuff! Silly Fabrizio got in over his head, didn't he? XD *rolls around* God he's such an uke.