This is sooo good! Wow the story is really sweet and loving and I just love the way Fabrizio is so inoocent. Wow, you are such a talented author and you should update soon! I hope this fic would be as good as your last one and this time...please make it a happy ending _

Meh. 'Brizio really is naive, huh. :::shrugs:::

Oh well. It'll make for a more interesting story, I'm sure.

Aww... Carlos' little sisters seem adorable.

It's taking me a while to get used to the way this story is written (I'm not sure what it is, but there's something I'm having a hard time accepting about the style), but I'm getting there, and enjoying the storyline.

Hmm... Very interesting beginning. I enjoy stories with all the complications of loyalty, favoritism, etc. This should be a very good piece of reading material for me. Good job.

Wow, sweetheart.

This is a fantastic piece, not least because you don't shy away from the vulgar-by this I don't mean disgusting, but common.

Your language is beautiful as usual. Your characters are gorgeous, as usual.

I'm in love with this story. As usual.

Ooh, Carlos, you filthy ho! *grins* Read the entire thing with a stupid fat grin on my face, of course. *huggles 'Brizio* He's so naíve, bless his cotton socks, I wanna take him home *_* You have to write chapter five quickly! Or I will poke you!

Happy now? XD

I love it! I simply love this. I hope you continue, this is a very interesting story, and I want to know what happens. -

That was so good! I read the love that dare not speak its name, and this is just above that. I simply love this, and I can't wait to read what happens next.