Reviews for Crimson red |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i adore the first two lines! it came to you quite nicely. great job! and keep writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Job! :o) |
![]() ![]() ![]() fun, nice poem |
![]() ![]() ![]() KOOL POME ROCK ON |
![]() ![]() ![]() This poem is very angsty, but I can't deny the truth in it. I love the first two verses: "The crimson red blood / stains the wings of the innocent". Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful rhyming and powerful, sad message. Very well done. Good job! |