Reviews for Washing Eight PM Off My Hands
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 10/17/2005
I liked the line about how all the girls that you work with speak hispanic, or something like it. It seems that way for me to. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.
unexpected source chapter 1 . 8/22/2002
this is interesting, very interesting, your branching and livid metaphors are a monster to be grappled with! Its great!
Jade6 chapter 1 . 8/20/2002
I loved the ending on this one... it sort of had an air of confusion to it which was really powerful. Anyway, like always, I enjoyed it!

Jade
Curtis J. Perry chapter 1 . 8/20/2002
I began to notice even moreso now that you tend to go and describe the little things which make a situation unique. The best example was in the sun always hiding himself. Although it was merely chance, it gave just the right feeling and mood to the poem. I also liked your analogy to the past on the third-last stanza... I suppose you should use different conjunctions so as to not confuse the reader, or if was that in the intent, I don't know. Eg.: 'and when there were old women...'

Anyhow I'm currently trying to download aim, maybe temporarily. Talk to you then.
hoellenwauwau chapter 1 . 8/20/2002
ähem...somehow i don't really think i understood your poem. _