|Reviews for Washing Eight PM Off My Hands|
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 10/17/2005
I liked the line about how all the girls that you work with speak hispanic, or something like it. It seems that way for me to. Keep up the good work.
| unexpected source chapter 1 . 8/22/2002
this is interesting, very interesting, your branching and livid metaphors are a monster to be grappled with! Its great!
| Jade6 chapter 1 . 8/20/2002
I loved the ending on this one... it sort of had an air of confusion to it which was really powerful. Anyway, like always, I enjoyed it!
| Curtis J. Perry chapter 1 . 8/20/2002
I began to notice even moreso now that you tend to go and describe the little things which make a situation unique. The best example was in the sun always hiding himself. Although it was merely chance, it gave just the right feeling and mood to the poem. I also liked your analogy to the past on the third-last stanza... I suppose you should use different conjunctions so as to not confuse the reader, or if was that in the intent, I don't know. Eg.: 'and when there were old women...'
Anyhow I'm currently trying to download aim, maybe temporarily. Talk to you then.
| hoellenwauwau chapter 1 . 8/20/2002
ähem...somehow i don't really think i understood your poem. _