Reviews for Southern Florida
unexpected source chapter 1 . 8/22/2002
damn it to hell this is a good poem.

damn it.

i live in south carolina you know

kai
Jade6 chapter 1 . 8/20/2002
I like this! My favorite lines were:

birds are waiting

on

the

telephone wires grasping

human

dignity

Very deep. You have such a way with words.

Jade
Curtis J. Perry chapter 1 . 8/20/2002
Again, I love the little things you notice in a situation. But again, I suggest better structure/ conjunctions/ whichever in order to make t more understandable. We aren't all poetic, you know :P.

Cya on aim, hopefully.
hoellenwauwau chapter 1 . 8/20/2002
hmmm...interesting.