|Reviews for Southern Florida|
| unexpected source chapter 1 . 8/22/2002
damn it to hell this is a good poem.
i live in south carolina you know
| Jade6 chapter 1 . 8/20/2002
I like this! My favorite lines were:
birds are waiting
telephone wires grasping
Very deep. You have such a way with words.
| Curtis J. Perry chapter 1 . 8/20/2002
Again, I love the little things you notice in a situation. But again, I suggest better structure/ conjunctions/ whichever in order to make t more understandable. We aren't all poetic, you know :P.
Cya on aim, hopefully.
| hoellenwauwau chapter 1 . 8/20/2002