OMG! i love yours tory.. can you please continue to update? ya know.. maybe the reason why you have few reviews when you deserve to have so much more is because you dont update! hehe.. jwkz.. oh... and i must tell the truth about your fic.. at first it was boring.. but it became really really good at the end! i love their romance! and especially when they do the "i-have-a-condition-as-punishment" thing was way hilarious! please continue.. you've come so far.. surely, you want ot finish this fic you have created.. guessing at the speed of your story.. only 3-5 chapters will do. i mean they're already in there "last" leg right? until the wedding and reunion of all ancients? so please update it.. i really like this fic and it will be sad to all your reviewers if you stopped.. its amost been a year since you've updated! please.. im really begging you! haha..

I really love your story and I ask you to please update soon!

disregard the last comment, I just read your bio. I really admire your strength of character, to discontinue your stories because the motive was wrong.

This is a wonderful story. And it appears to have been abandoned. Oh, well. You are probably busy, unable to work in it, or have a writer's block. I just want to encourage you to work on it whenever, because this one is definitly a winner.

hey, previously, you had said the Losta girl was barefoot, now you are saying she was wearing pointy shoes. You might want to fix this discrepancy, but it's fine if you don't.

how can the wraiths survive in intense heat if they are made of ice? Won't they melt? Or does the intense heat keep the ice at bay?

Oh wow! I love this story! Please continue!

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Wow. This is a magnificent story so far I can not wait to see what is going to happen next so please update as soon as you can.

this is a GREAT story! UPDATE SOON!

This is a really cool story. I can't wait to find out what happens in the closing of the circle. Please update very soon!Raine

This is well-written for the most part, but you seem to keep leaving out commas where they're supposed to be. For example:

"He seemed to have transformed completely from Adan, the dark and mysterious yet weather-beaten man, into Dioran a handsome king-like person, no less mysterious." Should have a comma after Dioran. If you have a name and then a description like this "Name ajective and ajective was a blah blah blah", then you would always need a comma before that first adjective.

If I did nothing but confuse you there, just remember to put a comma whenever there's a slight pause in a sentence when you say it aloud. Or get a beta reader to do it for you.

Hope I helped! Great story, by the way. :)

That was a wonderful story. It gets better and better as we go along!