Reviews for The Last of the Ancients
Juniper Nights chapter 29 . 11/15/2005
nice story
Hannah C. Thaw chapter 29 . 11/15/2005
OMG! This is about the best story I have ever written. I seriously hope you are thinking about getting it published!It would sell like crazy! I, being a selfish beast, am in serious want to the next chapter! PLEASE UPDATE! If it will mkae you update faster I will send a continous stream of compliments to you...:DHannah
Nala Ether chapter 29 . 10/18/2005
i really enjoyed the stories u had up on . just when i had discovered last of the ancients, when i was awaiting an update for that excellent story, i read that u have abandoned the story. i don't think the story was a waste of time. it had an awful lot of potential. you could've done alot with it with time, effort and plenty of well thoughtout and considered support. i'm disappointed that you aren't completing the story, i thoroughly enjoyed it. i wish u well with your further writings, and hope that one day something may rise from the ashes of last of the ancients, maybe on the net, maybe in paperback, that u yourself feel is truly worthy of your skill and myself as a reader can lose themselves in a fantastical world. thank you
anon chapter 29 . 10/15/2005
I love this story! PLEASE update SOON!
Keja Toshiro chapter 28 . 9/22/2005
WOT reread! this story is amazing you must write more im dying to see what happnes!
Keja Toshiro chapter 29 . 9/15/2005
IiotComputerLetMeOn chapter 29 . 8/31/2005
Hey this is great keep writing. Question: will the rating go up after the wedding? glad you finally put in a makeout scene i could feel the friction between thoose two. keep writing!-Cassie
clair-a-net chapter 29 . 8/19/2005
good stuff it has been a while so what is up with mirabella?
cath2356 chapter 29 . 8/18/2005
oh my god i spent all day yesterday reading this story and I am know in love with it! Everything about this story is great! The characters, the detail and the plot and story line. I hope upon hopes that you update soon.
maho.shojo chapter 29 . 8/4/2005
O! hehe, or is it oh?Well anyways...

This Story is Crazy AWESOME! Well.. not crazy... Wicked Awesome... wonderful! Great! Amazing! it's soo much! I'm In Love!
maho.shojo chapter 20 . 8/4/2005
Ah, the wonders of Love! hehehe. Too bad we all couldn't fly! That'd be so awesome! But then, it would also be very hard on people Babysitting evil little people. Not that all children aren't angels... D

If Devony is going to be a Dancer... will she have to learn all the self defense stuff as well?

Hmm... Well, onward onto the story!
Dragonmount chapter 29 . 7/31/2005
YAY AN UPDATE! *clears throat* Yes well, as you can see I'm excited that you have a new chapter up. Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter! Hope it comes out soon. I will beg if it doesn't come out soon. I will! I swear it! :P
MiidKniight chapter 29 . 7/29/2005
That took me forever to read. Should've reviewed earlier cause now I don't really know what I was going to story is one of the BEST i've ever read on fictionpress. Which believe me when I say is a LOT of do you come up with iT? I don't think i could ever come up with anything like this in a million years. You need too think too much and have everything connectI hope Mirabella gets back soon. And Thaven is a prince? Update
psychedelic mishap chapter 29 . 7/28/2005
great, great chapter! they're so close! ok...i really don't like the way mirabella's acting, andi seriously don't get why she's acting so. and thaven? PRINCE? whoa! hope you can elaborate more in the next chapter - mwa!
confusedpyroangel chapter 29 . 7/28/2005
Awsome Story...can't wait for more!
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