Reviews for The Last of the Ancients |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so deleriously happy that you updated! I love your story, it is so polished and creative! Also, your dialogue language amuses me, how it uses old & newspeak all mixed up. like "make haste" "layover." hehe. I think this is my favorite story on fictionpress right now! So please do update, I love it! /end gushing ;)~drenchedinwine |
![]() ![]() UPDATE! PLEASE! Or I might...die. :sniff: Ok maybe not, but please! JUST UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd love to have one of those really smart reviews where I tell you how to improve your story...but how do you improve on perfection?...Please update! |
![]() ![]() God I've waited forever for this update. I absolutely love this story. ) Keep up the wonderful work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() :skipping around the room, Giggling:Yay, you finally updated. I am so very happy, thank you. It was also a very good chapter. Please keep updating! |
![]() ![]() UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is MARVELOUS! You just HAVE to update |
![]() ![]() Spent the last 4 hours reading this and damn is this a good story. Love it to bits. Hope you update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a weird story. But I am enjoying it so far. I love your Character development and your story idea and plot. The suspense is nice too. I'll finish it and review again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() GREAT STORY! love it! update now! *does jedi mind trick thingy* You will update now. You will update now. |
![]() ![]() please update! I love this story, this is the second time I read it. Please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! Can't wait till the next chapter comes out, I was up hafe the night finishing this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS STORY! I WILL LOVE YOU MORE IF YOU UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for updating! It was a good chapter. I'm glad they're waiting. It's so romantic. sigh. Please update soon. |