entrancing. absolutely entrancing.

oh...nice chapter! thanks for updating!what's up with mirabella? i was looking forward to devony being a dancer! all lithe and stuff...oh well, i'm loving adan...keep on updating!

Great story. You have a talent for not exaggerating in elements. There is a balance in every aspect of your writing, not too much action, not too much romance, or protagonism, so that the world you have created, along with its inhabitants, seems almost real (in a fantastic sort of way, of course). Keep writing, and you'll have a loyal fan.

I loved the makeout scene, they should do that more, it is a romance you know. I still love it and please read and review my new poems songs and stories. you a a great writer. -CM

Wow... this is absolutly amazing! I absolutly love it! Your characters are just so real, and everything is described in such detail. It's just amazing! Please, for the sake of your adoring fans...please update soon. PLEASE! TTFN

Spirit of the Sky

That was a great action packed chapter, I loved it! So much happened without jumping ahead in the story. I do hope you continue to write soon, I check everyday to see if it has been updated. It's too exiting to have very much patience, lol, jk. Thank you for writing a fantastic tale.

Oh, thank goodness! You have updated! I was afraid that you may have just abandoned the story ;_;! I'm really unbelieveably happy you're still writing! *jumps up and down with happiness* I loved the chapter, by the way ;) you have yet to disappoint me! Great job, keep it up! Can't wait for the next update!

WAH! NO! MUST WRITE MORE! and i like the twist thing you did with Mirabella :D nice! UPDATE ASAP OR SOONER!

Aww that was a real cool chapter. Glad to see that she's still a kid - as in her playing games. It was really good of Adan to stop, athough it might have taken some self-restraining. Only till she turns 17... then they can do whatever they want! The whole issue with Mirabella ended to quickly, and well is was weird. I don't know... she just became too humble lol, if there's such a thing!

Update soon. You an onbiously see you're doing a wonderful job here. Love it,

~Bubblegum

AH! You can't stop now! MUST! KEEP! WRITING!

Yeah, I haven't read it in a while, so I'm not completely sure of all of the details, but if Devony was to stab Mirabella, how would she not die? I'm just a bit confused, BUT UPDATE SOON!

I've yet to read chapter 26, or 27, but i'm sending this one because that's one more review for you :D and i wanted to add this to favourite stories :D. This way was just easier, and more beneficial :D

i really enjoy your story. please update soon.

Man I love this story! It is so good. I can't wait until the next chapter, please update soon. I am not really one for the whole fantasy genre, but after this story I think I might be really getting into it. I especially appreciate how well you state what you want and don't linger on the un-important. Some stories go on and on about small insignificant things, I love your style of writing, not just the plot. Keep writing, you're doing a wonderful job! And I really don't mind short chapters, shorter and more often is preferable to longer and less frequent. Thanks again!

~ Rose

Nice chapter! I can't honestly remember if I have reviewed this before, but I appreciate having a well written story to read when I feel like reading something online! _ (although books are my prefered method of reading. Oh, that reminds me, when you finish this, be sure and publish it, k? I'll be the first to buy a copy!)

Wow! I must say, I'm thoroughly impressed! You have been able to keep this story so interesting and have been able to enhance the plot in so many ways! It's so hard to find a good story now-a-days, so this story came as a total surprise. It's absolutely wonderful; I absolutely LOVE and admire the way you are abole to develope your characters so fully! Even the giants and the fairies have lives of their own, and each creature has a history so completely distinctive from any other, that I'm simply beyond speech. This is absolutely one of my favorite stories! Please update! I can hardly wait until I see the next chapter! (Hurry! I fear I am dying with anticipation!)