Reviews for The Last of the Ancients |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i love this gosh darn story! man i hope you punlish it! its so rad! please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story just gets better and better...you are an amazazing writer, keep on writing:) ~Greeneyes616 |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a really good story. Sorry, I normally gush a lot more about stories that are THIS good, but its past two in the morning and I'm beat. Please keep up the good work tho, and update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() holy shit...thats one good story! (sorry about the swearing) that has got to be one of the best stories that i have ever read! your plot is really good, and i love your characters! i've noticed that its taken you 2 years to write 26 chapters... but i suppose patience is a virtue. and i'm so glad that adan/dioran and devony are getting married! i hope you can update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is confusing me, I don't know who firia is or who ifirta is. And I didn't remember the elves, at all, it's as if i didn't even read about them. I guess i'll have to read the story again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story as really captured my attention. u have very good plot going ive been reading many stories lately and u r surly 1 of the beta. i hope u update soon cuz im a very impatient person right now thr r too many stories out thr that im waiting to be update im hoping u wont fail your audiance in update soon. ciao amigo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am so happy that Adan and Devony finally got together 'cause you could totally tell they like each other. keep writing! |
![]() ![]() Brilliant as always. WIth each new chapter that I read I am more impressed with your vivid imagination. Your descriptions of thoughts and feeling are incrediable. Please keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful! Great Chapter! OMG I Love this story so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE it! It is so well written i can hardly stand it! Great Chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know you must have heard htis a thousand times, but thsi is wonderful! Extremely well written and fascinating! I cannot wait to go on. (Please pardon my spelling errors.) |
![]() ![]() Still checking up on your story. It's getting better if that's even possible |
![]() ![]() Ok first of all i read this entire thing in ONE day! thats how good it is! plz update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi im sorry i didnt review other chapters i just read ur story I think it is really really good in the last chap. i didnt get the thing about the fairy limping. or the horrible thought. Momomonkey |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im amazed by how much detail you put into everything, keep writing |