Reviews for Tony's Mistake
Wingsoflinesia chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
Haha! I get it now! I think you need to emphasize that he was a jerk a little bit more, though. Compared to the last one I read, though, it's AWESOME! Good job!
An Inside Joke chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
Very good. I liked how you let us kind of see how Tony thought, and I really liked the ironic twist at the end.
Ultimate Schuyler chapter 1 . 8/5/2003
I liked this alot. It was great!
MJE Michael chapter 1 . 12/25/2002
ironic, yet it seems sutiable for the type of story.

so you like the DRAGONLANCE series? their cool, i think, and though Raistlin Majere is evil, he is a very cool chararcter compared to his twin brother who is always befuddled until the Twins trilogy. and it's great how Raist can stand even through Kitiara's insults and demeaning remarks to him.

anyway, a little off track...

good luck with the next stories and read some of mine dude
SaraMudo chapter 1 . 12/1/2002
How ironic! I, personally, thought this was funny. But, it was a little confusing at times.
Tanesha chapter 1 . 12/2/2000
Oh that's cute well writen though.
Arwen chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
Well, Tony certainly got what was coming to him, didn't he? Only one piece of advice: to highten the suspense, make some of the sentences and paragraphs shorter. Keep going though!