Reviews for The Big Book of Pingishvolien
Akari-Kari-San chapter 11 . 2/16/2009
Omg! I loved this! I thought it was so funny! XD I hope you don't mind, but I'm usuing this in a class project, don't worry, I'm giving all rights to you. I just can't think of a better poem to use. Well, I loved it! Great Job!
d3dacct chapter 31 . 1/3/2004
Hm...
It must be song inspired, the imagery doesn't quite lock into place so I can't get a full picture of the poem.
Perhaps you should have tried a different rhyme scheme for this, but as all poetry thinks of its own accord, I wouldn't be too concerned if everyone else doesn't share your vision.
Keep it up!
d3dacct chapter 30 . 1/3/2004
It seems very romantic to me, yes some of the imagery you use may intice the more perverse to think of sex, but I think you've found a friend.
A special someone perhaps?
Whatever, I'm glad to hear you're cheering up. _
d3dacct chapter 29 . 10/22/2003
I assume you dislike their music? Well, we'll settle for now but expect you to post something happy in the future, you're far too angsty for a non-bishounen.
Amethyst Blood chapter 3 . 6/20/2003
That's intresting. I liked the imagery of indifferance..a plaugue I too suffer from. The switching back and forth is a bit...odd. Mostly because I think some of your rhyming sounds forced, but other than that, yay!

-Dice
d3dacct chapter 28 . 5/26/2003
(o.o) That was a lovely ballad, it truly was.

I have nothing else to say but that I hope to read your story in the future.
d3dacct chapter 27 . 5/26/2003
The explanation fills in the tiny details, ne. Do try to cheer up, a poem about those two is not fodder for happiness...
d3dacct chapter 26 . 5/26/2003
Hrm... Very nice imagery used...
d3dacct chapter 25 . 5/10/2003
Hm... Definately not related to that evil AL song, much better in fact.

Do try to get some music put to a couple of your poem/songs please.

Note: if you make it a song, make a standard chorus too.
d3dacct chapter 24 . 5/10/2003
Cute, do you have the music, or do I have to hum along my own tone-deaf lines?
d3dacct chapter 23 . 5/10/2003
Cute, perhaps you were reading the poems late at night and that's how this came to be?

Good, odd, too much like Lewis Carrol's though. Note: Reading others' poetry in bed with ruin original creativity.
d3dacct chapter 22 . 5/10/2003
Kewl, definately a Duo and Heero poem at some point, you say you just found this on a notepad? Odd...
d3dacct chapter 21 . 5/10/2003
O... You seem so sad in nearly all of your stories, is there no joy in you?

You need smething haappy, try to watch cartoons more and munch on chocolate, that always helps!
d3dacct chapter 20 . 5/10/2003
That was cute, though such things never run through my mind, as all my poems are random and horrible...

O well, keep up your rants.
d3dacct chapter 19 . 5/10/2003
Erm...

What happened, I got confuzed... *holds head*

Is good anyways though!
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