Wonderfully written. Joe's perspective is easy to see and understand even though the story is narrated in third person. Her childish understanding of things around her made me smile, as did the ending. Kudos for writing a waff story without being sickening.

That was really good. It is hard to make any friends in new places, but it must be really hard for her, considering the language that I don't know what it's like to be laughed at... It happens more than I'd like actually. I love this story. Very well written.

Cool! This has a great start! Good job!

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