Reviews for Reflections of a Killer
Sara Minks1 chapter 1 . 2/3/2003
my only criticism for this is that you need a little more proofreading, especially in the beginning- there's a repetition of words that kind of downplays the rest of the story, which is very well written- as well as once or twice, i think you used one word, but were looking for another- e.g. forbidding vs. foreboding in paragraph one. I like your alusions and your metaphors- a very poetic horror story! Well done.