Ooh...I really like that...it's very angry. That's usually when the best stuff comes out!

~BR

I KNOW...I had a friend who rejected me too. But she apologized some time ago (after more than a year) so I guess I've forgiven her (though sometimes I wish I'd told her how much she hurt me). Anyway, great poem! love, kat

oooo... I like it a lot... is this a reflection of losing a close person? if it is, you're wrong, the friendship is there... and the pain will take a while, and it may never go away... if its aa breakup then its their loss.

How angsty... Just how I like em'! Keep writing I loved this poem!

Thumbs-up! Very good. Keep writing!

it's not very happy, but it's very good! i like it a lot!

I am very impressed. Coming from someone who has written dozens of poems - this would be one of my favorites. There's so much put into a few simple verses. I admire this poem. ;)

sadly, I can relate. love the rhyme, like i said in countless number of reviews, i can't make my poems rhyme for the life of me. i'm jealous of people that can make their poems rhyme. :P