That was awesome. I loved everything about it especially the way the ending is so unexpected. You are very talented and I look forward to reading your other stories.

woah...i'm really intrigued by this. you should definitely continue this by all means. i'm really into finding original work on here since i have a huge work of my own posted. i just love the POV here...very well done. i hope you update soon. ~_

I really enjoy your stories. I can't wait to read more of them! :)

Wow! I really liked the twist ending of this! Are you going to continue this or keep it like this? Keep up the good work