Reviews for The Love Of A Slave
DawnsFire chapter 4 . 3/14/2011
I love the story. And I'd love to see it continued - though it's been like 10 years, so I doubt that's a possibility. Anyway, the interactions between the two are adorable.
teardropsONroses chapter 7 . 7/9/2007
i'm sitting here trying to think of what to write to tell you. All i get is this weird fishy noise i get when i don't know what to say. you should definately right more. i love love love love this story and i can't believe you left everyone hanging like this. so write more! please.
teardropsONroses chapter 4 . 7/9/2007
i was going to try to read the whole way through without reviewing, and review at the end, but i can't. of course it's not terrible! it's beautiful, and you did a very good job. i love it!
DawnsFire chapter 7 . 5/19/2005
Awsome, nice love story. You're a good writer, and this was a good story for you. You do wonderfully with dialouge. If you wanted some constructive critisism, you could add some more details, but the story is fine without them. All in All it was a great story. Hope you finish it.
Desirta chapter 7 . 4/15/2005
It's so good!I read through it in one sitting, I can't wait until the next chappie comes out!
000000000000000000000 chapter 7 . 4/20/2004
This is a nice, sweet romance you've got going here. I'm enjoying it.
The writing, however, feels very rushed. Rushed as in you typed it very fast and slapped it up on as soon as you were done. There are just a lot of little mistakes and run-on sentences. Not big deals, just typo-like things.
Your style is fine, very clear. Just give everything a good, thorough once over. :) I'm not trying to be picky-but it can get distracting.
I'm curious what Cordius had to say before Antonia kicked him out. He didn't seem his usual self. What happened? [dun dun DUN!}
Sweetvenom1 chapter 1 . 4/19/2004
This story is absolutely the best, I mean that. I love your scenario and characters. I am a bit pressed for time just now, I will leave longer, better reviews for the other chapters later!
MJNobody chapter 7 . 4/18/2004
ohmygosh ohmygosh ohmygosh
This is such a great story!
I love the way you switch perspectives every chapter, it really allows the reader to get to know your characters. Oh this is such a good story! Why havn't you updated?
I think you should update.
mollsthepolls chapter 7 . 3/22/2004
GREAT story!
focusly chapter 7 . 10/30/2003
wow I loved this! Theo is so cute! Please tell me you'll continue this? **puppy dog eyes**
Kathryn Merlin chapter 7 . 9/26/2003
i read all of the chapters just now. they are amzaing! i cant wait to read more! after performing julius caesar in the summer, i have been obsessed with ancient rome, so i was looking for something with rome in it so this is perfect. what i would do, though, is put more talking between theo and antonia instead of just kissing and the such. keep up the good work!
elohimdancer319 chapter 7 . 3/29/2003
wow. i plead you, keep it up. can't wait to see more. good luck.

Anna Bolina chapter 7 . 3/23/2003
I don't usually like love stories, but I like this! I don't usually find myself to be a fan of long stories, but this was just...superb. You avoided most cliches! Please write more! (Now for the self-advertising part: Please RR something of mine as I did yours! I suggest The Roads in Rome, another story about a girl in Ancient Rome who is forced to marry against her will)
saiyan-girl-cheetah chapter 7 . 2/7/2003
Oh dude! you must continue this story! I love this one! That dang perv Cordius...I just loath the guy! Which means you're doing a good job! and I just love Theo and Antonia being's so sweet! Please don't let this end like Romeo and Juliet! I'll cry so much i'll die from a broken heart like an elf! Okay maybe I won't die but i'll feel bad! Please let them have a happy ending! And most of all please continue with this story!
trixiedust chapter 7 . 12/22/2002
Wow! Keep it up!

I first read a Legolas story today, and decided to read more of your work! I am not disappointed!

Please post more of this story!

And of course, of the Legs story too!

Happy Christmas!
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