Reviews for Armistice
unexpected source chapter 1 . 8/31/2002
delusional and exotic
Kievsky chapter 1 . 8/30/2002
I like how some of the paragraphs seem dark, almost disturbing in the earlier lines, but later it becomes optimistic. This (like all of your other poems) is excellent; you have much more talent than many of the published poets.
waterlilypad chapter 1 . 8/29/2002
You can see the little child looking up and idolizing the father. It's very well spaced to fit the innocent observer.

This was grrrr-eat!