Reviews for Aix
E. Gao chapter 1 . 2/7/2003
Of course, silly-

there are too many

cities, places,

(mosques, perhaps)

in the world, and

not enough time,

not enough lives.

Anywhere but sweet,

overly saccharine

California is fine

with me. Amen?

EG
unexpected source chapter 1 . 8/31/2002
you have the distinct tinge of mina loy, not in style, but more the free palpitating flowing of images and mirages and motion and juxtaposition. This is why she was called obscure and genuis simultaneously.

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Werecat99 chapter 1 . 8/29/2002
I liked it. I had to read it several times before capturing the essence of it, but in the end it "stuck" with me.