unbelievable. that is the biggest cliffhanger of all time. with most other authors i can look forward to some letdown from cliffhangers. puh-leaze finish the story? the story was last updated nearly 8 YEARS ago. just a few more chapters can't hurt?

hey.. my sister read this story a long time ago. i only got around to fully reading your story now. i really like your story! and the characters are great! i still have to read it all.

it was years ago that i first read parts of this fic. and i mean yearsss. i got older now. and got a bit more mature. and read a lot of other stories. of course you have too. i admire your courage for writing this story and letting others read it. i only want to say, the way you write the fic sounds like a rant all the way. (it always sound immature to me now. but believe me i really like the story!) and when i read Xerxes' POV in this chapter, i thought he'd be more subdued and thoughtful. a great improvement will be to vary the way the story is narrated depending on the character's POV.

i don't know if you've finished this fic yet (i haven't reached the end) but if it isn't, i hope you would continue. and if it is finished, do write more original fics! i like your ideas :D

OMG! it's only the first chapter and i'm alreadtycrying from laughter, i mean literally crying! i love you, please marry me *offers up burger ring*

Please capitalize your sentences! It's so annoying! I'm going to start right after this to stop being so nice and letting all of you off the hook! I'm serous, I'm going to start reporting this! The rules say you have to correct to the best of your ability and I don't think this is! This is just half a$$ed.

OMG OMG OMG THIS STORY IS THE BEST! please let Adrian at least kiss syd, i mean it's obvious that she's gonna end up with xan...*pout* i would have liked Adrian and Syd to be together but oh well, i read your A/N...am very dissappointed...but Xans not bad...Please update soon_

LOL! I try not to stand them either but they're just too cute_

This is really, really sad. You just keep on rambling on and It's really annoying. It's like you're an ammature that just likes typing. Do your hands twitch? Cause it seems as if the only way to ease your impalsive hands is to type whatever comes to your mind.

AH! It's way past Christmas! Please update soon!

WHAT HAPPENED TO CHRISTMASS! ITS WAY AFTER THAT! please please please go back to writin mbv i mean you left such a cliffy to!

U havent updated...update...please

The torture devices have been out for a while... I need more, I've read it since the beginning and it just kills me inside that I can't read the ending to it. I love this story, its great, but the no ending part really stinks...

i remember last reading this story during my first year of high school, one of the first stories i've read when fictionpress was still new..sigh.. i'm in my second year of college already and this still hasn't been updated :( still, this will always be one of my favorites :) i hope the author is still reading the reviews..hehe..wishful thinking!

the war has begun!

Guy fight! and it's not hormones, it's testosterone!

couldnt you have just made him gather a crowd of his ex-girlfriends and anyother female around and make him swear never to act un-gentelmanly toward them again and tell them that he was going to abstain from "the act" until he turned forty? that way it's slightly less perverted.