Reviews for TP003
xo0Jayne0ox chapter 1 . 1/7/2003
Didn't like it
Jonathan chapter 1 . 12/29/2002
:: gasps for air from the intensity ::

I don't know how you are able to capture feelings and emotion so well in writing. I think anyone that reads this should be able to clearly follow the thoughts. Drawing the reader into the thoughts and dreams conveyed here. Simply put. WOW!
star65 chapter 1 . 9/7/2002
Harshly emotional in every word. Excellent job with twining the unattainable desires with the cruel reality. The ending was stunning. Dark, depressing, and beautiful story told.
just like me chapter 1 . 9/4/2002
that was really good