Reviews for This Is Me
Darkened Shadowz chapter 1 . 10/18/2003
at least someone knows how i feel! great job

keep writing...

thanks for the reviews..

i like most of your work

~*Darkened Shadowz*~
Gaia Rady chapter 1 . 7/7/2003
Great job, I love your writing style. And thank you for reading my poetry. I am thinking about posting one of my stories, I don't know though.

Anyway, keep writing. I know how you feel, getting dhut out all the time and such. People are so harsh, they judge on first sight and then hardly ever change their idea. Continue to write and I will continue to read...
Suicidal Butterfly chapter 1 . 6/23/2003
Okay now The double negatives bothered me a bit- but thats fine. I realy enjoyed this poem. It reminded me a lot of my life.
Spanish Amor chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
dont give a shit what anyone else says,

i had to learn it the hard way

now i regret not lisening to them when they were still talkin.

donno if youll understand that. i dont really understand that last sentence either,~ jus read it a couple times~

not to good at expressing myself.
Ashes of a Willow chapter 1 . 6/14/2003
Good for you to speak out your mind! This is a powerful poem! good job!
Sarina Fannel chapter 1 . 5/17/2003
Interesting peice. I've...felt that way before. The world is usualy against us all, and a lot of the time the only defence you have is yourself. Ya have to stand on your own feet because no one is gonna do that for you. You write very well. I enjoyed reading it. _ty for reviewing my fic "Tattered Dreams" btw.
IceAngelDarkMoon chapter 1 . 4/26/2003
I can really relate to this a lot! Thank you very much for your review of my poetry! This is very similar to my poem Betrayed. You captured the feelings for this very well and I like how you spereated the lines (mine tend to go on for a while!) This is a very well written poem!
Snowfall's Silence chapter 1 . 4/21/2003
I can relate. It's good... except..

-I don't like nobody.-

-Maybe that's why I don't talk to nobody.-You do realize that these two lines mean 1: You like everyone, and 2: You talk to everyone? I know that's not what you meant but it's just a little cofusing. Other than that, good job.
Isarandel chapter 1 . 4/5/2003
anyone who allow you to be yourself is your real friend.

anyone who accpet you for who you are is your real friend.

yes, they can say hurtful things, some dun even apologised. you will get mad, but if you stay quiet about it, they will think that it's alright to say. so many you should tell them...

i got friendship problems too. ever since i'm 13 when i'm studying in a new school and a new environment coz i just moved house at that time. so i got no friends at this new environment. the first few days were difficult, but eventually it will be fine.

this is what i think... and remember anyone who accepts you for who you are is your real friend...
unexplainedmuse chapter 1 . 3/25/2003
you most likely dont like anyone cuz theyre not like you.

ive lived in a town full of total fucking idiots man.

its sucked for so long.

i had so much hatred in me.

but now..i really just find it funny.

theyll never be at the state of intellect i am. or my level of maturity.

theyre pitiful really.

someday youll find someone whos on your same level, and then your hatred will deplete away, because someone will know exactly how you feel, and youll be too happy about that to worry about those idiots.
Crystal Snowflakes chapter 1 . 3/1/2003
I can so relate to this, lol
VladimirsAngel chapter 1 . 2/26/2003
*makes a little bow to you* Thanks for coming and reading. I chose to read this one of yours first cos I thought hey, better get to see what you see yourself as.

Sounds really familiar from my schooldays. Painful but true. Well done!

Needa S chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
I think a lot of us can relate to this. But we can all change if we really want too! Good job! Keep writing!
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
Interesting. I used to have the same mentality. Read my poem "Gotta Knock A Little Harder". I think you'll like it.

~Heart of the Sword
Cindy Moon chapter 1 . 1/18/2003
This is a poem that decribes how most of us are...

life's all screwy
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