Reviews for Eye Candy
Xiaou Nem chapter 1 . 1/26/2005
never ever begin with "I don't think this is such a good poem" - your comments interrupt the poem. Let the poem speak for iself, and let us have our own opinion.I think it's "essence" ... but "essance" does sound more French ;)it's a nice picture, but a bit too do you call it "Eye Candy" - first I thought that was irony, but...?
Skittles1 chapter 1 . 1/25/2004
I like it, nice job!
Celestial Fire chapter 1 . 12/11/2002

It's good

I don't really have anything to say...
Mimi and T.K chapter 1 . 11/16/2002
Hi I am Mimi of Mimi and T.K. Well anyway I just wanted to say that I am a big fan of all your work and that this is just as good!

This poem is soooo sweet!

And I hope that My friend T.K., and I will be just as good as you someday!

Lusa Van Bern chapter 1 . 9/6/2002
Nice start. You need some kind of punctuation, unless you just want the reader to flow through the poem continuously. Does it have a title?