never ever begin with "I don't think this is such a good poem" - your comments interrupt the poem. Let the poem speak for iself, and let us have our own opinion.I think it's "essence" ... but "essance" does sound more French ;)it's a nice picture, but a bit too do you call it "Eye Candy" - first I thought that was irony, but...?

I like it, nice job!

uuuuuuuuummmmmmmmmm...

It's good

I don't really have anything to say...

Hi I am Mimi of Mimi and T.K. Well anyway I just wanted to say that I am a big fan of all your work and that this is just as good!

This poem is soooo sweet!

And I hope that My friend T.K., and I will be just as good as you someday!

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Nice start. You need some kind of punctuation, unless you just want the reader to flow through the poem continuously. Does it have a title?