|Reviews for Just Another Girl|
| Black is Beautiful chapter 32 . 10/26/2013
The ending is so sad I'm currently crying my eyes out! :'(
| infinitelylydia chapter 32 . 7/9/2013
For something that I knew was going to happen, dang it anyway. The epilogue made me cry heaps. Shawn is just, wow.
| Secrets chapter 26 . 6/29/2013
He's in love with her, and she's halfway there and they don't even know it.
| Kirihime chapter 32 . 5/16/2013
Made me cry! Crap, that was sad.
| jayrambles chapter 8 . 1/5/2013
Oh, God ... this is a profoundly moving story. It's written brilliantly. Sorry I don't review every chapter.
This makes me realise afresh how lucky I am in that I have the prospect of a long life waiting ahead of me. I am free to love.
My exams will end after a week and then I'll read the rest of this story. :)
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/5/2013
| R. Ficst chapter 32 . 12/22/2012
Very much enjoyed. I loved your characters and their story. Just a few typos here and there, but the writing overall was quite good. And you definitely made me tear up a few different times. I enjoyed all the little details, especially their tattoos. Well done. Thanks for posting!
| F.H.W chapter 32 . 10/25/2012
You should label this story as angst...
I cried like shit... It was so saad the ending... But i loved the storyline. Cliched but sweet and cheesy, just how i like it;)
| humanwriter13 chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
So sad, yet so intriquing! I'll have to copy and paste this on a word document and read it later!
| AnonymousReads chapter 32 . 9/28/2012
Oh my gosh I cry and cry I knew I would but I wanted to read it anyways why couldn't you write an alternative ending where she has some kind of miracle sergury now I must cry my self to sleep. Great sad story.:)
| Angelbaby1991 chapter 32 . 8/21/2012
This is so sad!:(
I really enjoyed reading it.
| MEG0205 chapter 32 . 8/10/2012
Aww... Such an amazing story! I couldn't stop reading! The end was so sad, I wanted Charlie and Shawn to be together forever, but I guess I was expecting her to die. Amazing!
| loonly person chapter 32 . 6/22/2012
that was beautiful
| iCY the Polar Kid chapter 32 . 5/18/2012
I can't believe this story got to me. It made me tear up bad (though my stubborn tough side claims i am merely tearing due to tiredness and strained eyes) but still. So incredibly sad. Beautiful (T_T)
I love it honestly :'(
Keep it real.
| Sapphyre Nymph chapter 32 . 4/20/2012
This story has numerous grammatical errors and such. The subconflicts (such as the one with both Shia and Que) weren't very well resolved. Some characters weren't that developed but as a reader, you forget all that. Because the essence of the story is complete. This story was more than just a girl looking for fulfillment in her last months. This was about a girl realizing and giving others realizations. Charlie isn't 'just another girl.'
The thought is beautiful but I suggest editing it a bit to make it more realistic. The relationship of Shawn and Charlie as kids wasn't that clearly stated and Winston needed a bit more detail. But even so, I loved it.
Thank you for sharing this story with us.