|Reviews for Just Another Girl|
| dancrchick chapter 32 . 3/31/2006
you did an amazing job... i only had one slight spot where you could have done better, or at least i think. That would be the situation where Que and Charlie broke up, and i know they needed to break-up, i totally understand that, i just think it could be better. But thats all based on my gut feeling i got while reading so ignore me if you so choose. You're the author, what you say goes.
But this story was amazing... especially the ending. I loved the ending so much i cried. I even accepted that the story had a bittersweet ending, which i usually can't do. I need my happily ever after, so this story was definitely amazing enough to be one of my exceptions.
| Water Block chapter 1 . 3/7/2006
Really touching, thought provoking first chapter. I liked it, but unfortunately, I don't think I'm going to continue. I hate getting depressed, and try to avoid it as much as possible, and doomed love is only a sometime thing for me.
Great beginning, though!
| ashleyy chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
This story has kept me glued to the computer screen the only time i actually got up was to go to the toilet but even then i was reluctant. im sure u didnt want to know that but hey no one knows me here! yeah so eniways as i was saying... this story was amazingness ur writing is beautiful and its just amazing and i loved it. a few grammer problems here and there but cmon... hu cares bout those i make them all the time!... i mean u made me cry and i dont do that very often! not because u were mean which is usually the reason i cry, but because you were amazing. Now all i can say is, the ability to do that to someone is powerful and (yet again i say the word which i've used like a gazzillion times) amazing. :-) thankyou forever your fan, ashley moore x mwah
| g chapter 32 . 2/25/2006
OH MY GOAWSH! this is the third time ive read this story and it's still as wonderful as ever! it's so sweet and romantic! i feel like this story deserves to win an awrd of some sort. like "best romance story" or something. you rock my sock!
| saicho-18 chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
oh my gosh. i can't think of a praise high enough to tell you so i'm just gonna ask: are you a full-time writer? because you really should get this published. it's THAT good.
characterization's solid, through and through. i mean, i applaud you for actually not making your lead character a mary sue. gramar-wise, i'd say you have a slight problem with past tenses but nothing big. plot-wise you're good. and i especially like the fact that you didn't put too much focus on the medical terms and the times in the hospital. wise move, cause personally i think that that would've just dragged the story down. ah. you're good.
saicho_18 : slytherin -
| amyy chapter 1 . 2/18/2006
omg... like amazing :'(
| minal chapter 32 . 2/18/2006
I just read your story and I have to say it is the best I think I’ve ever read! You had me crying all through the epilogue and some of the previous chapters, lol that doesn’t happen often with me and stories. Thank you for writing it, it was amazingly amazing :) If I was asked to look at the story from a critical angle I would say that there were some grammatical flaws, but since it was so beautiful... that part is easy to overlook! :P Thanks again, glad I discovered your story and don’t ever stop writing cause you’re great at it! Lotsta luv, Minal X
| hi chapter 32 . 2/10/2006
Aww. Beautiful. :]After I started reading this story I couldn't stop. :)Very realistic & I love how everything worked out between Que & Olivia. ]One of the best stories yet that I've read on 't ever stop writing. )[This story definitely has my vote.]
| FadedWhispers chapter 32 . 2/10/2006
Gosh You had me crying all the way through the end of the story!
| FadedWhispers chapter 1 . 2/9/2006
Its just soo soo real!
| Girl-Predictable chapter 5 . 1/31/2006
you know who Sean reminds me of? My friend's adopted brother. Gah, he's so self centered, he once yelled at her for taking a shower at the same time. (Hot water issue) He's actually her cousin btw _
| jess chapter 32 . 1/26/2006
Wonderful story, I just read it in one sitting. I cried and laughed, as you should during any good story.
| Loriency chapter 32 . 1/14/2006
nice. Very nice. I know, nice is the most general word ever, but it's about the most appropriate word right now. It was nice. if you want me to be honest, i think you could have taken this a lot farther than you did. You have potential, I can see that. Your plot, characters, twists, everything, they all add up to what could have been a beautiful and amazing story, but whether you just didn't know how to do that, or you didn't know your story's full potential, i don't know. However, what you have here is a wonderful piece. Your grammar needs a bit of work, and at times I wasn't sure what you were trying to say, but it was understandable most of the way.
However, it was cliche. And I know, I said at the beginning that having the main character on the verge of death is an interesting twist, and it still is. The only thing is that it was very cliche. it was, to me, a take off of A Walk To Remember. Now, please, don't think that this is a flame or an insult to your story, because by all means, I honestly liked it so much that I grabbed some tea and sat down for a few hours just to read it. I've never done that for any other story...well, except for one, and it was awesome, but still. I'm only trying to point out the areas that need a bit of consideration. I'm curious as to whether or not you write anything else (in the past few hours i haven't so much as changed the web address to anything else. i've seriously sat here and read my eyes out), since i haven't checked out your page yet. However, you have definite potential. if you want, I can beta/edit your next new story, if you don't already have one. I hope you write other things, and i'm sure that as time goes by you'll become a better writer. Good job on this one, I really did like it very much. Cya around!
-AbbyBy the way, if you're going to check my bio for anything that you might compare your works to, it's not worth it. I don't post many good things on here. If you really want to know what I've written that I'm most proud of, just ask me. Believe me, what i have on here is nothing compared to the rest of it.
| Loriency chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
wow...way to make the story take on a whole new light. I love it. I've never read a romance story where the girl was going to die...it's a perfect twist, and I'm very curious as to where you take it.
| Anony chapter 1 . 1/7/2006
Dude (or Dudette), I just read the prologue and I've got GOOSEBUMPS. You've got my attention so quick and complete, I have no choice but to read the rest. Damn you.