|Reviews for Coffee|
| SweetGrape chapter 1 . 12/14/2002
Ha! Very cute and honest- easy to relate to.
Warm, familiar, comforting atmosphere in the first stanza.
'My world crashes down', 'My boyfriend says we're through' etc and then comes back to the soothing coffee, which reminds you of the first stanza feeling.
Second last stanza is strong and honest and funny:)
| idontwriteherenomore chapter 1 . 9/10/2002
Hahah babe, bout coffe? hehe it was very well written and even tho it can seam a bit depressing it was very funny! well done
| Chloe20 chapter 1 . 9/8/2002
Katie! (shall call you by proper name for change, now you are a coolies poet!)
WOW! That was amazing, I loved it! Was all deep and made me think...on the surface it seems to simple, yet at same time is so clever!
You never cease to amaze me, you are just sooooo talented, and sometimes I dont think you realise it...this is just amazing!
Wow! *takes deep breath to recover*
Love Chlo xx
| Pauls-Sex-Slave chapter 1 . 9/8/2002
yay coffee! i can understand that! i always wake up all bad tempered and tired or having a bad day and coffee always makes me feel better!
"I just say fuck to the world" liked that bit! hehe reeeallly good poem
| mango surprise chapter 1 . 9/8/2002
ARRAGGGHHHHHHHHHHH! my awe inspired babe helllooooooooooo!
Am so glad u put this one up! i cannot BEEEELIIIEVVEE u! i jus ask a simple what r u doing q, n u turn out to b writing something completely astounding. n then u say its NORMAL? hahhahahahhahaha!
yup, u really do amaze me. am neva gonna stop saying that. ur in this new aura to me now, haha, n look up to u so much.
neways, the thing i love about this poem is just that so many ppl can relate to it on so many levels! every1 needs a little comfort wen they're down n havin problems, and u turn to coffee! hehe, needless to say i'd turn to something like revels or milkshakes hahhahaahhaa, but each to their own! n just love how simple n effective it is. ahhhh i love! i know deep down u love, too.
neways, am off to read ur others now babe!
take care and don't stop being urself.
all my love, xxxx
| Twoooooody chapter 1 . 9/8/2002
its soooo collies!
haha, laughed for ages!
OLuv Trudy xxx
ps, an update will be around today, so watch out!
| BB9 chapter 1 . 9/8/2002
hehe that was gd!
uvgone all deep on us... like chris! lol! nah but ur at poetry! well done
luv hay and lou xxx