|Reviews for Corbiere Appollinaire Rimbaud|
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 10/17/2005
I love this; all of the french poets died young, this is amazing. I hope that your are still writing poetry; you really have a true talent and gift even if your not posting your work here anymore.
| E. Gao chapter 1 . 2/28/2003
French poets died young-"
yes but you haven't and
you are still here with
us writing your splendid
poetry, so it cannot be
the wine nor the cheap
cigarettes nor the rain
and tombs in Baudelaire.
"not I! not I!" Of course
not you, oh not you, if
only because the world
has not yet seen what
gems you have written.
| Aviendha19 chapter 1 . 9/10/2002
hehe i like this poem alot, its very french in an unusual way, a really cool way!, and thats just great, the "charcoal of lovers / streaked upon the rose- / print wallpaper" i love that line. youre awesome
ps thanks so much for the reviews. it makes me happy (:
| Kirney Slate chapter 1 . 9/8/2002
"...conquistador of paper and pen-'oh not I'"
Well... I'll say, you've outdone yourself. It's a clever poem. It feels like you have a relationship with french poets, either you love them so much that you mock them. Or you mock them so much that you love them.
"'for it is,', the doctor taking a sudden drag on his noxious cigar, dreaming of tangerines and the taste of them 'not the brandy...'"
| Jade6 chapter 1 . 9/8/2002
I really like this one. It is amazing how much of an impact poetry can have on both the writer and the reader. It is such a powerful mode of expression.