|Reviews for Japanese Submarine|
| Aviendha19 chapter 1 . 9/10/2002
marelna- this is a garnd poem. it truly is. the ending, does it. i dunno! but, "he is jealous of life.." i love the end, it just, ah! words cant say how much this poem touches me
| Smiley- Bear chapter 1 . 9/8/2002
KAKOI..cool! Keep writing!
| Jade6 chapter 1 . 9/8/2002
Some beautiful imagery in this one. Love it as always!
I have a question about your poetry in general... Drinking is a very common theme in your poems... like it is often either hinted at or blatantly stated... is there a particular reason for that or do you just like using it symbolically?