Reviews for Black Tuesday
unexpected source chapter 1 . 9/15/2002
laquor. its thick like hair gel. i hate hair gel, vasoline works better.
Kirney Slate chapter 1 . 9/12/2002
Strong begining. Line breaks for rhythem, nice.

It could use some more expaining, excepically the pidgion bit. But all of it is so well written. As usual, fresh imagery, innovative use of form, and hints of a deeper meaning.

"quiet womb of porvelain, of faucets and the mirror above

the clinical white-"

Wow...

The ending was much better about being more clear. I understood the poem other than the pidgeon stanza.

impressed as ever

-kirney
Aviendha19 chapter 1 . 9/10/2002
this poem requires after it, a moment of silence.

of course, it is good (as always, and i cant say enough how), and somehow-oh silly, but somehow it reminds me of Barcelona

(the fatefulness.) sorry that was obscure

but it does

lorraine
Jade6 chapter 1 . 9/10/2002
Again your poetry takes my breath away and leaves me speachless! You are amazing! )

Jade