Reviews for Not Unfinished
Jade6 chapter 1 . 9/10/2002
Impressive. It has a really sad feeling to it though. The second stanza was so sad... with the little boy biting his fist... shivers down my spine... what an image!

Desbaine chapter 1 . 9/9/2002
I like it but I don't know why... The objects placed about-the pretentious objects-and the texture that the descriptions give is exactly what I'm looking for and what I think is insanely neat in any work of art.