Reviews for The Salt Across Your Face
toysoldier chapter 1 . 9/18/2002
Hello, i'm glad that you wrote a review for my poetry... it makes it easier to find talented fellow poets on a site this big... and you really do have talent, although i'm sure you know that. I chose to review this one because i love water imagery... also, i see we have a favourite poet in common (ee cummings)... email me if you want to talk, I like chatting with people...
Kirney Slate chapter 1 . 9/12/2002
I'm not sure how to take this. The first few stanzas were just in-your-face imagery, and I loved it. I know what I took from it. It's a plea from the sea. But the second to last stanza is the one I had trouble with. It didn't seem to fit as well, into the flow. And I didn't get a lot of the imagery, it could be clearer. But jeez, this was very evoctive, very picture-forming.
Jade6 chapter 1 . 9/10/2002
WOW! This is so moving Rose! It was an amazing piece. Very deep!

Jade