Reviews for Killer, Serial
GrungeIsDead chapter 1 . 4/27/2004
This was really good, and meanigful. Keep up the good work! _
Mallory chapter 1 . 7/30/2003
I can't believe you only got an eight! This is great.
not sure yet chapter 1 . 2/2/2003
kool, i like it, esp the part about eats his cereal, same as you, great job
vegantrokk chapter 1 . 12/6/2002
holy shat! that was awsome!
Jaclyn chapter 1 . 11/17/2002
Fah'REAKY! :-O Fantastic job though - cool imagery and, uh, plot? Liked how it was sort of choppy, if you know what I mean. Not sentences, just images. Worked well :)
coat chapter 1 . 10/19/2002
I like violence, therefore, I love this poem. _~
star65 chapter 1 . 10/5/2002
oh... morbid. i kinda like it though. wow, buddie, that was impressive. amazing rhyming scheme.
CoolGetsCold chapter 1 . 9/21/2002
I loved it. Especially the "Eats his cereal

Same as you

Killer, serial

Kills you too"-part with it's could-be-anyone-thought and the twist in the last line...:) You're really ingenious. Love your work. Keep it up. :)

Love,

Malaika
E. Hisifithith chapter 1 . 9/16/2002
Cool! I like this! Good job!
I'mnolongerhereatthisaccount chapter 1 . 9/16/2002
Intersting you have a nice phrase of you maybe read and revew mine and W.M's new novel "The Fruits of Humanity"?I would really apricate it if you could and keep writing.
alicesun chapter 1 . 9/14/2002
gruesome -I likey! Catchy, too! I can see this becoming a song. Well done!
Thetis chapter 1 . 9/12/2002
Not bad, short and sharp often have the most impact for those who can't be bothered to sit and read a WHOLE long page worth of poetry. Also gets the point out there quicker. This might sound melovalant (don't know how to spell) but "Favourite knife, take life," this has to be my favourtie line, it shows the killer puts some sort of passion into his work, chosing his favourtie knife.
makka chapter 1 . 9/10/2002
Very short and sharp lines.

Very scary, especially the last line.

The images are VERY gruesome (chop her into a bloody mess)!

It's very clever- and especially impressive as it was done in 5 minutes!