|Reviews for in the long halls|
| Curtis J. Perry chapter 1 . 12/2/2002
Reminds me of Phantom of the Opera.
| unexpected source chapter 1 . 9/12/2002
a thick and heavy world
tenatious, and tormenting, and torrential
like a hallway,
with red carpets, like poe
like the 7 chambers.
| account inactive00000 chapter 1 . 9/10/2002
oh wonderful, you've written more-
god you're such a good poet, and i'm so not just saying that. there are so few really worthwhile poets out there. ack. and this poem itself is great, so lonely and windswept and i love the repetition in the last stanza. oh this is wonderful