Reviews for in the long halls
Curtis J. Perry chapter 1 . 12/2/2002
Reminds me of Phantom of the Opera.
unexpected source chapter 1 . 9/12/2002
a thick and heavy world

tenatious, and tormenting, and torrential

like a hallway,

with red carpets, like poe

like the 7 chambers.
Rose of Dresden chapter 1 . 9/10/2002
oh wonderful, you've written more-

god you're such a good poet, and i'm so not just saying that. there are so few really worthwhile poets out there. ack. and this poem itself is great, so lonely and windswept and i love the repetition in the last stanza. oh this is wonderful

marlena