|Reviews for the picture|
| moonlightsonata chapter 1 . 9/23/2002
This is like an orange dusty ripped
alone square small photo under a rock
at the river, and you wonder who it is.
And watching it for so long, you come to love
that person in the photo.
Raman Andreyevich Chechkov
| miss meaningeverythingtome chapter 1 . 9/14/2002
beautiful. you're too talented for my health.
| Jade6 chapter 1 . 9/13/2002
This is a beautiful poem. Your language and overall message are really powerful. I like your work!
| unexpected source chapter 1 . 9/12/2002
it sounds so familiar.
it is most well rounded, and i must say
that you can read alot from a photo, like my nonrepresentative excursions i get from them, always never seen by others, yet you are grandious in doing it, like a obscessed biographer in cairo chasing an obscure tribal arab
from desert to desert
| account inactive00000 chapter 1 . 9/10/2002
ack, the ending was so perfectly sad and right for the poem. all the coldness and the time and everything-
i really can't find the right words.