Reviews for the picture
moonlightsonata chapter 1 . 9/23/2002
This is like an orange dusty ripped

alone square small photo under a rock

at the river, and you wonder who it is.

And watching it for so long, you come to love

that person in the photo.

Raman Andreyevich Chechkov
miss meaningeverythingtome chapter 1 . 9/14/2002
beautiful. you're too talented for my health.
Jade6 chapter 1 . 9/13/2002
This is a beautiful poem. Your language and overall message are really powerful. I like your work!

unexpected source chapter 1 . 9/12/2002
it sounds so familiar.

it is most well rounded, and i must say

that you can read alot from a photo, like my nonrepresentative excursions i get from them, always never seen by others, yet you are grandious in doing it, like a obscessed biographer in cairo chasing an obscure tribal arab

from desert to desert

account inactive00000 chapter 1 . 9/10/2002
ack, the ending was so perfectly sad and right for the poem. all the coldness and the time and everything-

i really can't find the right words.