Reviews for Erik's Daughter
SilverclawRose chapter 1 . 4/20/2002
Cool plot...I think it jumps into the plot too fast, you could add a few more details, but other than that, it's great!
XyggiMAFearless MS Protector chapter 1 . 2/5/2002
ooh. cool
Meghan chapter 1 . 6/6/2001
It sounds like it's going to be an intersting and fun story. Please write.
Christine Analina chapter 1 . 11/25/2000
Ahhh! I'm writing a story on the same premesis! Noooooooooooo! Read it, I started working on it this summer...no...::sobs:: same idea... ::sobs::
NeoBahamut1 chapter 1 . 10/14/2000
, the story was good, though I'll have to say the same thing as before, you need to use paragraphs! This is a good piece of writing however, I should like to see more.
Lynne chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
Hi! Great story! Keep it up!
Kat chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
I really like the begining. It's a good, with a good start. When are we going to get more? Hmm? ::giggles:: Really, i can't wait till the next part comes out! It looks promising!