Reviews for Free
saintchris chapter 1 . 8/24/2003
That was a good poem, and I think you caught my feelings exactly with the lines

'Don't cry for me America

Time will come one day for us all

Cry for the hate and misunderstanding

That made these great towers fall'
person chapter 1 . 8/5/2003
I thought your poem was very well written and it flowed together so nicely. I think it would be great as lyrics to a 9/11 tribute song. :)
MistrissD chapter 1 . 4/23/2003
Hmm, I love the perspective you took with this one, portrays 9/11 rather well, nicely done
Glowing Embers chapter 1 . 10/29/2002
Written well...but so sad :(
Carter Tachikawa chapter 1 . 9/29/2002
Very nice. I very sure that this is the way a lot of victims felt. It was the worst tragedy ever. Anyway, you write nice poetry. Wish mine was as good. Anyway, nice. CT
Jennifer Jolie chapter 1 . 9/24/2002
Just promise me, America

That you’ll remember this tragedy

And that you’ll use that sad memory

To be always the land of the free

OH. MY. GOSH. I wish I could add you to my fav list overandoverandover again. I really do.
Star5 chapter 1 . 9/15/2002
I really loved it. It was beautiful.
Chibi Moony chapter 1 . 9/12/2002
This gorgeous! Positively spectacular and emotional. In a way, it's spell-binding, for you can't stop reading this because it's the truth... the one and only truth. A very sad and touching poem. Once again, wonderful job!

Moony
nny777slavelabor chapter 1 . 9/10/2002
oh this story too makes me cry, what happened was so sad i feel for all of them every one.