I was reduced to tears. I don't know how, I read over it again and again and it gives me the same response. What's wrong with me? Has my icy bitchiness finally swayed under such a moving poem? I read it yet again and more tears come. What the heck have you done to me? you made me human...ai, that's scary.

I love this. Its so sad! omg! You hav usually hav 2 search around for work like this! You should write more of this stuff its great!

Vikki

That's a very distressing poem, yet sad and beautiful. Your imagery is astounding and I love your use of adjectives, metaphors and similies.

It's a lovely poem :) you almost made your very own distressed grapefruit cry against her will you know. But I like it.

Thankyou for posting it and well done for another brilliant entry!

Love,

Your Very Own Distrssed Grapefruit

Wow, Very good poem! Excellentness! If you find the time please check out my poem 'Somewhere to Start' Thanks!