story was nice just fast but you i love it so much i really hope you can continue it but it was a good way to end it super sweet

I don't like Jenny.

I don't care if she's acting like a normal nice girlfriend.

I don't like Jenny.

#TeamLyla

I think this was a really sweet story. I enjoyed reading it.

WTH you could have just made it WOULD YOU OFFICIALLY WANT TO DATE ME OR MAYBE BE MY GIRLFRIEND! WTH wife! That's craycray!

more, that was just bizarre, take your time and update will definitely be looking forward to it.

sounds good.

Great story! Just an FYI, though...hope you don't mind... :)

No one chooses a roommate based on a telephone call. Never. If you want to have them make this arrangement *without* a face-to-face meeting first, you can write that they had mutual friends who knew them both very well who could vouch for their character.

Or, you could have them linked up through a room mate finding agency that guarantees thorough back ground checks and references checking.

And you could have him plan to be there when she moves in, but something happens and he gets called away, so he leaves the key under the mat and texts her that he has to leave.

this is great so far

The ending really was rushed i dont how Jason went out with one girl for eight years and not realize he didnt love or even like her but after one date he wants to marry her and not even say those three special words (I love you). That was actually just kind of unrealistic but i still liked it. Good story. :)

its been a wonderful 7 chapters so far! :D

WOW...erm...that was abrupt! good but too short if you get what i mean

I loved it, save for the rushed ending.

YEYEYEYEY

WOOT!

Poor Lyla