you should post this on AO3

Writing fiction about real people isn't allowed on fictionpress. You should post this some place else!

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Oh Marilyn is so~cute, I love him.

WOW... That was, amazing... It seems so much more likely to have happened than any other ones that I have read. It's just, wow... Very beautifully written, and there's even no slash! YAY! I shall have to recomend this to my friends. One last thing. VERY good job!

This is one perfect story! I loved it! *adds to faves*

I loved it.

It's really good, there are only slight things that should be mentioned- Nobody except Barb (his mom) calls Marilyn Brian, Marilyn doesn't drive all that much after he was stranded in the ghetto with the snake wearing makeup during the Smells Like Children era, and Trent and Marilyn grew apart before ACSS... Good story. It almost made me cry :)

This is HILLARIOUS! You have a great, precise knowledge of Marilyn Manson, and it makes me want to read more... You have truly captured their personalities... Great work!

I adored this!

You honestly should write more. You have a gift.

this is so beautiful! it's obvious that there aren't many fics about MM and the spooky kids that are serious ones, but this one sure is! i appreaciate that you took the time to write something that means so much to other people. thank you so much!

xx

Mari~

This is brilliant. This rox. It describes the Marilyn Manson band perfectly. I'm adding your story to my favourites.

See ya, DarkAngel

wow that was fucking powerful . shit man that story was the best manson shit i have heard. keep up the fucking great work

u rock dude:)

You know what?I cried.I actually cried while reading your really great and well written,I love hard 2 impress,and u did it,way 2 ON!