A little pretentious, talks alot of stuff that supposed to sound meaningful but onyl ends up sounds self , i liked it, I liked it very much.

Alex

Hey. Gret. Love how you kept the sad, solemn tone throughout the story. how you write rocks.

wow, you are really talented. this had lots of wonderful descriptions. I really liked the way that you ended this. it really sent the story home. Great job! I'm really impressed.

Girl. Bi. Whee.

this is a good story! but being the clueless airhead i am, i can't seem to figure out if ace is a gurl or guy... gurl cuz of latino bar maid comment but guy wen he/she broke up w/ a gurl... i dink i'm jus stupid... but can someone tell me?

wow, i must say that this is excellent. very very good. i love your writing, its, for lack of a more sophisticated, controlled word, stunning. and id love to read more. love to. cheers.

hey

it was a little short, but okay.

Interesting. I like it.

Excellent stuff.

This is the first story I've liked enough to review. It was excellent, like a spell. Never predictable, it kept me there until the end.

I really liked it. I think you should totally continue this. I really love the way you actually take time and write. It's quality work, very hard to find here sometimes.