Reviews for Target Practice
sheer lunacy too lazy to log in chapter 1 . 10/20/2002
Good lord. I really don't know what to say... that was stunning. I'm speechless. There was something about that that made me read it three times over, and yet still left me astounded. Your style is incomparable. I will be reading more of your poems. Oh yes, I will.

blue skies
lorraine chapter 1 . 9/15/2002
very good poem. i sense something of the world in it, something grand, something about seeing the mountains from the back porch, in the dusty haze, and the crickets are singing in the quiet twilight and the world is still
Jade6 chapter 1 . 9/14/2002
Another masterpiece for your collection!

Jade
Star5 chapter 1 . 9/14/2002
you are wonderful.

can i add you to my favorites?

just beautiful, your poetry is the best i've ever read.
miss meaningeverythingtome chapter 1 . 9/13/2002
that's an amazing poem.

shit... i don't know what to say. it's wonderful;

i love cummings. yep, i think that's all...