Reviews for Serpentine Power
b-U-b-TRUE chapter 1 . 3/22/2005
I really liked this, apart from the aprt talking about how he has no arms and legs to support him, lol we already knew that! But good job, some nice descriptions!
estrela chapter 1 . 12/7/2003
o pretty! i think snakes are cool.
Kyalia chapter 1 . 6/10/2003
The 'he' & 'tree' sort of hurt the non-rhyming idea- that sounded a little trite. Otherwise, it's a goodset of comparisons- I have a soft spot for snakes.
Aradia Madrea-Nox chapter 1 . 11/29/2002
Thank you sooo much for writing a poem that is not a diss to snakes! (Sorry, I was born in the year of the snake...)

EEEEEE! Love it! Please keep writing praise for snakes... or I will... and I will ruin snakes forever, I guarantee it! Oh, well. Keep writing poetry, please!

*Kiayla*

PS.. See, I'm not as crazy as I sounded at first! ;D
Carter Tachikawa chapter 1 . 11/5/2002
Yeah, snakes are cool even they look frightening to others. Keep it up, I enjoy your
Olusenka chapter 1 . 9/29/2002
Hey I noticed how much stories poems u wrote! WAy to go ! I, myself, LOVE snakes and cats(yes i did actually read halfway through your bio) Well this poem nspired me to write a poem of my own about snakes. ummmm

the green snake...uh

crawls..? I have no poetic talent whatsoever *sighs* Ne way I live in Australia heheh so byebye _
Pink Parka Girl chapter 1 . 9/15/2002
Well, it is a cool poem..._ And snakes are so cute!