|Reviews for Serpentine Power|
| b-U-b-TRUE chapter 1 . 3/22/2005
I really liked this, apart from the aprt talking about how he has no arms and legs to support him, lol we already knew that! But good job, some nice descriptions!
| estrela chapter 1 . 12/7/2003
o pretty! i think snakes are cool.
| Kyalia chapter 1 . 6/10/2003
The 'he' & 'tree' sort of hurt the non-rhyming idea- that sounded a little trite. Otherwise, it's a goodset of comparisons- I have a soft spot for snakes.
| Aradia Madrea-Nox chapter 1 . 11/29/2002
Thank you sooo much for writing a poem that is not a diss to snakes! (Sorry, I was born in the year of the snake...)
EEEEEE! Love it! Please keep writing praise for snakes... or I will... and I will ruin snakes forever, I guarantee it! Oh, well. Keep writing poetry, please!
PS.. See, I'm not as crazy as I sounded at first! ;D
| Carter Tachikawa chapter 1 . 11/5/2002
Yeah, snakes are cool even they look frightening to others. Keep it up, I enjoy your
| Olusenka chapter 1 . 9/29/2002
Hey I noticed how much stories poems u wrote! WAy to go ! I, myself, LOVE snakes and cats(yes i did actually read halfway through your bio) Well this poem nspired me to write a poem of my own about snakes. ummmm
the green snake...uh
crawls..? I have no poetic talent whatsoever *sighs* Ne way I live in Australia heheh so byebye _
| Pink Parka Girl chapter 1 . 9/15/2002
Well, it is a cool poem..._ And snakes are so cute!