Reviews for Darrow And Bryan
toysoldier chapter 1 . 9/22/2002
hmm... ok, I'm slowly making my way through your poems one by one... I wanted to review this one because I really, really loved the line "The light is stronger in reflection." I mean, damn. that's just so... beautiful. I really love your use of language, like 'antiquated veins,' that's great. i love the language in all your poems. I hate just leaving 'that was awesome' reviews, but i can see that you have motive behind just about every word you write, and you don't waste language. What's there needs to be there. Something I struggle with is writing many words when i only need one, but you don't seem to have a problem with that...
Jade6 chapter 1 . 9/16/2002
This is wonderful (like always). I love your work (like always). You are so creative, intelligent and original (like always)!

Take Care

Jade
Kiwii chapter 1 . 9/15/2002
That didn't really really make sense, but that's okay. I liked the descriptions and the way you linked one thing to the next.